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Title:  My Brother, My World

Author: Jay of Lasgalen

Characters: Elladan and Elrohir

Warning: Slash, twincest. PG13

Disclaimer: Tolkien's, not mine.

Midnight-dark hair flows like silk through my fingers.  His skin burns against mine, and his kiss, tender in the aftermath of passion, is sweet.  I feel his soft breath, quieting now, warm against my neck as his arms encircle me.

 

“Love you,” he murmurs.

I turn to look into his storm-grey eyes, eyes that I have seen darken with desire, as slowly he falls into sleep, head resting on my shoulder.

 

I too am exhausted by our loving, but here, now, I want nothing but to lie in his gentle embrace.

 

I love you, my brother.  You are my world.

 

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Comments

My, oh my

[lkk.livejournal.com]

I never thought you'd take on the subject twincest, Jay. But now that you have. My, oh my, oh my. Very nice. I think the first line is my favorite. Midnight-dark hair flows like silk through my fingers. That's very sensous and sets the tone perfectly.

Re: My, oh my

[jay-of-lasgalen.livejournal.com]

*grin* No, I never thought I'd write twincest either. Or slash. Yet there's something very addictive about it.

Thanks for the comment! (Especially as I've had some very negative feedback along the lines of 'I'm so disappointed in you for writing this smut!'

[the-wild-iris.livejournal.com]

I like this. It's candid, both sensuous and tender, and it makes the relationship seem natural - twincest can seem like a gimmick in some stories. Very pretty.

[jay-of-lasgalen.livejournal.com]

Thanks, Gemma! As I've said before, I'm quite surprised at myself for writing this - but I find I enjoy it. Glad you liked it!