[identity profile] periantari.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] tolkien100

Title: Innocence Lost


Author: <lj user="periantari">


Fandom: Lord of the Rings


Characters/Pairing: hobbits


Rating: PG


Word count: 100


Warnings: none


Challenge: 'When We Were Young"


Disclaimer: I wish these characters were mine, but alas, they are Tolkien's. I just think of every spare moment.


...


When we were young, we didn’t fear magic rings and everlasting wounds.


We were not left behind.


We did not see a mad man burn his son alive, a city under siege, a troll crushing you till you could not breathe.


We didn't worry about dwindling energy, a barren wasteland, a master so weak he could barely hold up his head.


The Quest had not happened but now that we have survived, we can live to tell our children of a darker time when hope seemed futile. Now we still live to see a new age, peace under a King.

Date: 2023-05-01 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
That's wonderful.

Date: 2023-05-07 10:11 am (UTC)
fredbassett: (wanted poster)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett

This is absolutely superb! So well phrased and evocotive of all the events described.

Date: 2023-05-09 03:46 pm (UTC)
liadt: Fuji Maiden by Tamasaburo propped on elbow looking to right of frame (LotR Gandalf)
From: [personal profile] liadt
Excellent work!

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