For Undue Influence challenge

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Title: Undue Influence

Author: periantari

Fandom: Lord of the Rings

Characters/Pairing: Denethor

Rating: PG

Word count: 100

Warnings: none

Challenge: 'Undue Influence"

Note- I had to muse a bit on this but influence can be both from person or thing, and i chose an influential object.

Disclaimer: I wish these characters were mine, but alas, they are Tolkien's. I just think of every spare moment.

“For thy hope is but ignorance. Go then and labour in healing! Go forth and Fight! Vanity. For a little space you may triumph on the field, for a day. But against the Power that now arises there is no victory.” -The Pyre of Denethor, Return of the King

Denethor knew only despair.  He had seen the future and he had heard from Faramir himself on how he sent two halfings to their doom. Did he not know how risky it could be? He ran his strategies in his head more than once and he knew that time was running out.

Gondor was doomed.

Now his son burned with fever that would not abate. He was dying and his turn was soon to come. It was only a matter of time that they all perished.

The Palantir showed the reality. Gondor was awash in rubble. The Enemy had won.

** drabble count does not include book quote

Comments

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

Fab, I like this take on the prompt — my mind jumped instantly to the Ring when I saw this prompt, but of course the palantiri fit excellently!

[periantari.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much ! At first I was thinking people influence but palantir fit well with denethor imo.:)

[hhimring]

Well done!

[periantari.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much !

[liadt]

Clever use of the prompt, bravo!

[periantari.livejournal.com]

Thank you ! Really appreciate it and the prompt ! It’s a very interesting one !

[liadt]

I'm glad you liked the prompt:D